Comments on: Poem: Her assorted heartaches

By: Neha Viswanathan

Neha Viswanathan — Sun, 21 Dec 2008 16:04:11 +0000

So much less taxing than eight hours .. don’t you think? :)

By: Neha Viswanathan

Neha Viswanathan — Sun, 21 Dec 2008 16:03:41 +0000

“deceptively coy and stunningly malicious” – How perfect. If only all of us could manage that as effortlessly.

By: Neha Viswanathan

Neha Viswanathan — Sun, 21 Dec 2008 16:02:57 +0000

Yes. Finally. Very relieved.
And here I was – thinking – that the placement failed. :)

By: Ravikiran

Ravikiran — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 18:42:27 +0000

Just wanted to be the first to note and appreciate the “Fair Trade Coffee” strategically placed in the poem.

By: Ankur

Ankur — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 14:10:27 +0000

I know two women who are remarkably like the one you have outlined here – extremely articulate, fashionably casual, with a seeming lack of self-consciouness. They seem to have an asnswer to everything and someone at their beck and call all the time. Alternating between being deceptively coy and stunningly malicious, according to the demands of the situation.

By: Shefaly

Shefaly — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 11:35:50 +0000

A related, good read from Usha Vaidyanathan:

http://tinyurl.com/6ydulo

By: Ankit Jain

Ankit Jain — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 10:11:03 +0000

Hi,
Just stumbled upon your blog. The fictitious girl in your poem sounds either extremely messed up in life or extremely smart to pick things easily and turn desires into reality at each step. is it?
Keep writing…